ESL and IELTS Help 4 U

Hi! and Goodbye!: essay examples

Posted on: July 1, 2010

So…a great essay has an introduction that grabs attention (see post: June 28, The Introduction)

and a conclusion that is interesting and keeps the reader thinking. (see The Conclusion, June 29).

I promised you a few examples. Here’s one for today…

Topic: The pros and cons of the internet. What’s good about it? What are the negatives?

Introduction example: “You’ve got mail!” These days, we have ALL got email! We can connect across the world in seconds. We can find the answer to any question. We can tell the world who we are.

Conclusion example: There are advantages and disadvantages to everything including the wonderful technology of the internet. People need to be thoughtful and wise about how the internet is used. Are you?

Another example will come your way in the next post.

Send me one of yours! I love to read your writing!


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